These are excellent questions for anyone critiquing a book or story to use, whether you’re a beta reader for a novel or the members of a critique group. I’m going to send them to the members of my group before we get together next week. Thanks to Gabrielle Harbowy for posting this.
Are there any parts where it felt like it dragged / you got bored / wanted to put it down?
Are there any parts where you weren’t sure what was happening?
Do the characters feel well-rounded and human? Are there any characters you especially like or don’t like? Did any characters seem especially flat, dull, or lacking in distinctiveness, who shouldn’t have been?
Were there any characters or places with names so similar that you had a hard time telling them apart?
Does the world feel well-rounded and realistic enough for you to imagine it as you read?
At any point, does a character do something that feels like it’s impossible, implausible, or against their nature?
How would you describe what this book is about to someone else, in one sentence? (This is a great one for making sure that the most important elements are coming through with appropriate weight for the reader. If what they think your book is about isn’t what you think your book is about, that’s really good to know.)
Did the plot climax and resolution take too long / resolve too easily / seem implausible / let you down?
Was the plot / resolution predictable? Did it surprise you? At what point did you know what was going to happen?